a novel response

hi :)
Today i am writing my blog post about a project we had to do called a novel response. I based mine off a book I once read. Here it is below-

Kawa of Care

Hi! Today I will be writing to you about Kawa of Care and explaining what it is.

The Kawa of Care is about using your chromebook sensibly and properly. Kawa of Care teaches you how to be responsible online and how to have a positive digital footprint. Here is my Kawa of Care poster I made with Kyra and how to write a sensible, helpful comment. 

How to make a successful comment-

1. Start by greeting the person. Say hi, hello, or maybe introduce yourself.
2.  Compliment them! The person might not want to read your comment if it's all negative. You could start by saying I like... or I love how you...
3. If the blog post reminds you of something, make a connection. E.g- If the post was about what book they were reading, you could say if you had read that book before or if you are reading a similar book.
4. Add some more information.
5. Ask a question or answer them if they have asked one.
6. Re-read to see if your comment makes sense
7. Check for punctuation
8. Check with the teacher
9. Publish!